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...what do I do? .....is there a thing that makes it look like captain kirk did'nt write it?
I can't have someone restructucture 200 stories!
.....does a word processer do that?
I don't know how to write like they want me to.
....what happened to style?
heres the story...
~ YOU HAVE CHOSEN METH ~
this is your job description as "disciple of meth" you will be a missionary touring poverty, death,bending decaying minds, rotting, insanity, violence, perversions beyond your power to understand, that will steal your soul away and leave you as hollow inside as a meth mobile, just a brainless bottom feeder going around yearning, needing, desiring METH baybee! running on meth, and stopping, sputtering and choking, dying...with out it.
You will spend all your time wanting, and hoping to get METH. ....You won't get a home,it's cool, it's not important, neither are relationships, dreams, education, career, relaxing, dopamine, nothing else will be within your reach. ......besides meth!....and getting some more!
as long as you got meth, that's all you gotta worry about. What your personal limitations are will decide how willing you are to get METH! REMEMBER you get METH ONLY!!! NOTHING ELSE!
....you will lose everything you ever cared about, you'll become self absorbed, greedy and secretive,psychotic,paranoid, scattered, sketchy, obsessive-compulsive, repetitive behavior, it will captivate you and blind you while....
.............the new personality bores a place in your brain and starts to rot it out... how far you decide to fall will determine the extent of your damage. ......if you stop now, when you finally are unable to support your habit, you'll be faced with selling your soul or quit.
you'll never be right again...you ability to receive pleasure naturally, your ability to feel joy....will be lessened.
it gets your dopamine. ....the demon eats it all, and lives in your head instead.
........the demon will never go away.
I have a bad demon tied to a chair in the rotten part of my brain that stays forever. that demon, is greedy, self absorbed, sketchy, unable to hold a job.
none of those things are me.
it will betray you... while the important people in your life beg you to leave, you can't see how bad he's DESTROYING YOU you. it lies, it steals, it makes your loved ones stand by helplessly as they watch you rot to death and go insane.
METH DESTROYED OUR ABILITY TO ENJOY LIFE AT REGULAR SPEED.
WE DON'T FEEL GOOD WHEN WE DO IT ANYMORE!
WE DON'T FEEL GOOD WHEN WE DON'T!
MISSED SO MANY EVENTS OF my LIFE AND LET A TWEAKER REPRESENT ME!
IT WILL HAPPEN!
METH DOESN'T LOVE YOU ANYMORE THAN IT LOVED ME
IT LIED! IT SAID IT LOVED ME TOO!
...I loved it, and i did anything for it, I didn't sell my body,I considered it very carefully, over quitting. ....but I chose my soul. ....believe me I sold EVERYTHING else...or LOST
....it's your best friend, it cures loneliness, gives you strength and confidence, vive rent energy, ideas, and beauty at first.
you love it, and it loves you and you will always have crystal to hold you when things get bad.
I remember thinking flat out, I'll go see my best friend.
and while you are loving it, it is robbing you. .....it takes all your money, strength, natural ability to feel joy, you, what you stand for, and believe in to your core... ...you throw it all away and put all your faith in whats good and true to YOU. like following Manson...
"Charlie is Jesus" ....yeah right.
...but its deep. even Charles Manson's momma still thinks he was framed.
....we defend, protect, cover, and are extremely loyal.
we jumps Thur hoops like trick poodles and smile back at it ....it says... you gotta do more.
it's the most hardcore brainwashing, scam, lie, hoax, slap in the face betrayal there is.
we stay with it for YEARS. ....we build our life around it.
we love it, we're married to it. it's like we are in this group that was screwed over by the same con artist. ...and the mothers whose children fell into a cult. like Jim Jones.
it whispers the same promise in all of our ears and falls short.
it gives us an edge on the world. ....but soon the entire universe has the edge on you.
and speed laughs in your face and says...
you poor fool
I feel like my best friend threw me out of the car I picked it up in. .....and I just woke up beaten, and alone on the highway
You need to stop with the "..." They denote a long pause and are to be primarily when you denote speech. As in "Hmmm.....let me see." Kitty said to Dog. The more ".." the longer the pause. You write in a poetic style, though I find it hard to understand, because it doesn't have a rhythm I can find. But just type in plain jane sentence structure much like I am.
And when you decide to change the subject slightly, either from the description of a book to the way Jake looks at MaryAnn, form a new paragraph. Just pay attention to any other posts that are more than a few sentences and contain paragraphs. Look at news articles and you'll figure out the patterns there. You'll get the hang of it, you just have to practice at it.
You'll get the hang of it, you just have to practice at it.